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Originally Posted by jools1
This story reminded me of a friend of mine, Marian Wilder, who's stories are published on Amazon, among other places. You can look her up. It was great until the ending, which I thought was a bit lame. With that improved - I thought maybe exploring the possibility that the events changed the main character's outlook and habits, giving you the opportunity for sequels - you could publish it in the same way. Just a thought...
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Originally Posted by Menorca
Thank you so much for this story, which stands out positively from most others.
Finally, no messing around, no constant moaning, no sex with a hundred people. No, a young girl wavers between courage and despair, wants to show how brave she is, pushes herself to the limit, and then, unfortunately, it all ends badly for her.
Thanks for the story; I might have wished it had a happy ending...
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Originally Posted by slammerkin
Great story, thanks for sharing
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Thanks for the feedback!
Luckily for all of us, there’s a sequel - 12 years later Ellie has (mostly
) moved on, which is why she can’t believe what happens
And of course Ellie’s story will get around her campus a bit, maybe even inspire a classmate to try something…
Full disclosure, at least two stories I plan to post here are repeats of stories I posted on a different forum that ceased to exit a few years ago or more, under a different name (naturelover). I’ll be making slight changes to update them to Ellie’s universe, but if they sound familiar when you read them, then (1) wow, good memory 😳 and (2) anything I write is an original work of mine, not stolen from anyone.