Great story! Keep going!
Can you set the stage with more detail - describe your apartment / house set up a little more. Was this an apartment building, a house sub-divided, and where and how far away was this neighbor in relation to your window? Was he across the street, across an alley, picture window in another house, what? And how was it only he saw the show [at least until this last chapter when he was joined by others/] Nobody else out on the street, at 7:30 at night?
Inquiring minds and all... Had a GF years ago that might have been like this if I had been clever / creative enough. While she was a Catholic, she was not a pure school teacher type by any stretch.
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