Thread: [Fictional Stories - ENF] Murphy's Law
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Old 05-24-2020, 04:58 PM
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Seems good do far. We always can use more enf stories. The writing is pretty lively so far, and it's a decent premise. Only critique I can think of is most stories use white, blonde protagonists, but that's hardly a valid critique as that's just personal preference anyway.

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