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Originally Posted by Marauderr
So many parts are my favorite. Obviously the first exposure is great. The first moment of losing her clothes, and the first actual moment of exposure. But even better then that, is the lead up to the exposure. For example, in the story I wrote, the woman is in a predicament where she knows she's exposed. Leading up to the actual losing of the clothes, she's very paranoid. That type of situation is great. After the clothing is gone (exposing the underwear/bra, or just naked), but *before* exposure is my favorite part. I tried to emphasize that most in my story. Before the exposure to actual people, while they're naked/ near naked, the situation where they're running, hiding and otherwise trying to escape exposure. In the best stories, the woman's thoughts are best explored here. At least for me, haha.
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I do enjoy a bit of build up to the woman being exposed. She's lost her clothes but hasnt been seen by anyone yet, then at the last second just when she thinks she might escape without being seen something happens that exposes her to people nearby.
Even better if the whole incident takes place somewhere that adds to the embarrassment, say for example at her job.
All her co-workers now know what she looks like naked, and after all this is over when she returns to work in the future she'll always feel a little paranoid wondering if her co-workers are picturing her naked.