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Old 08-20-2019, 08:44 AM
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Default Chapter 2 coming soon

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Originally Posted by Marauderr View Post
Great work. I've written one enf story and am writing an euf story, but that's stalled. I know it can take a lot of effort to write even one chapter.

I hope you continue this story.
Thank you! I appreciate the compliment!

I'm rewriting Chapter 2 right now. The whole point is to write colorful descriptions of the sexy and funny ways the guys use the remote on the different girls they see, and the girls' reactions to being zapped by it. I'm trying to limit each section to about 1000-1500 words, and to avoid boring exposition dumps regarding the remote's backstory, how it works, etc. I don't want to make you wade through a dry instruction manual when you just came here to see the tartan miniskirts of every waitress at the Tilted Kilt suddenly rip off simultaneously.
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