Amfanom-
Thank you for reading my story and the kind words. I understand your comment on having a more "public" element to heighten the embarrassment. In my stories I use a literary device called "suspension of disbelief". Meaning that some of the events would not take place in the real world, but in the frame of the story its possible. A fantasy story with magic, monsters etc. is a complete suspension of disbelief. I stretch things a little in my works. A public cat fight and stripping falls within the realm of possibility. Maybe even a spanking I can see taking place. Of course there is seldom any outside interference. In real time there would folks breaking up the action. For me, sex in public is too much of a stretch. Other than the set up Roxanne pulled on Barbara and Teresa in the Community Theater, all the sex acts I've written are in private. Everything else was subtle arousal, except when Maria felt up Barbara in the Gentlemen's Club.
Speaking of Barbara, I think she has gotten more than her fair share of attention, both positive and negative, lately. I think she deserves a break. This latest story was result of a suggestion by veryy9look and an idea I've had for quite awhile that Michelle was due for a good rogering.
I appreciate all comments and suggestions. If you would rather share them privately, you can always send me a pm.
Thanks,
obo
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