thanks for pointing this out.
jho and rracoonz—
thanks for pointing this out. I’ll contact OCC site admin and ask that these be moved to Fiction. The 1st part is factual, and does belong where it is now, however since it goes well with the 2nd part I’ll ask that both be moved together.
I wrote the 2nd part in the ‘voice’ of Carol, expanding on how her feelings might be imagined. It’s my reading of what she told me on the drive home and in the following week, but since it may have some embellishments as seen through the male lens, it is not wholly factual. I’ll try to get both parts moved. But please be assured that the 1st part is true.
When I submitted these two pieces, I chose the “A Day at The Nude Beach” category, not realizing this was in Non-Fiction. In fact, upon reading Deslusional’s entry, it read like Fiction and I thought I was in the right place.
Like you, I’m interested in preserving the integrity of the various categories on OCC’s Forums. Thanks for bringing this to my attention.
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