Thank you to all who gave me your input. I know the photography is really shitty, it is my first time

I am taking each and every suggestion and implementing it in ways i can. Mike230, i take no criticism as flaming, i really appreciate all the very good input you had to give. Klondike, the pictures are much larger when i take them. I can take up to 3072x2304, but that is just overkill and for a website i would have to scale them down anyways. i take my pictures at 1600x1200 right now and i just shrunk them for this forum. Attached is a picture of full size. Again thank you guys for your input, it will help me a lot.
I will post some more from my next shoot with some pointers from you guys :P