The girl is cute enough...the photography sucks.......
Pics of girls with worn, dirty soles to their shoes are BAD! Makes the girl look cheap.....
Girls with their knees pointing straight at the camera make their knees look HUGE and are unattractive.
NEVER take pics aiming down at any girl who is standing.....unless you're a skilled photographer.....otherwise you make her look short with short dumpy legs....
You asked for honesty....... I certainly wouldn't pay to look at the girl...cute as she is, there's just too much free stuff out there....and I sure wouldn't pay to look at your current style of photography...read/look at some good books on portrait/nude photography and look at styles of established photographers....if you intend to enter the world of naked lady photography....it's already saturated and you need to be EXCELLENT to stand a chance of making it.
None of this is flaming you....just being totally honest.....