Question
Your characters are Kitty 'Shadow Cat' Pryde and Jean 'Marvel Girl' Grey.
Why do their names keep switching to Kate and Jane?
Is it an autocorrect thing? A couple spelling errors I can understand. But I went through and counted and their names are switched nearly THIRTY times. One of which is in the title! I'm not saying this to be mean but I feel like more effort should have been put into proofreading this before posting. The fact that you - the author - don't seem to care enough to get your characters' names right set a bad tone for your readers.
But that's just the opinion of one nerd on the internet. Take the advice however you wish.
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