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Originally Posted by BootyBounceBupe
Since I like to read stories with detail, I have made mine with quite a bit of detail as well. I also think it is useful to have detail across cultures. For instance I read a quick story about <hopping in a jacuzzi> and it made no sense to me because at the time I had no idea the people were in a hot bath of sorts. So a description about the setting makes the story so much better for me. For those who disagree, I will try to start all the bawdy sections in a new reply with some hint that things may be getting <inappropriate>
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I think you have to assume that people know the basics, like what a jacuzzi is. Otherwise a story that should be concentrating on eroticism end up like "we both jumped into a tank of water. It was heated to 40c and the water was circulated by a large pump. Water was injected into the flow to create a bubbly effect. Around the edge were nozzles to diect the waterflow and a knob controlled how much air, and therefore bubbles were produced." Or, simply state we jumped into a jacuzzi and fucked.
Personally i dont read stories that look over long. I havnt read yours
