The elephant sanctuary
Since I like to read stories with detail, I have made mine with quite a bit of detail as well. I also think it is useful to have detail across cultures. For instance I read a quick story about <hopping in a jacuzzi> and it made no sense to me because at the time I had no idea the people were in a hot bath of sorts. So a description about the setting makes the story so much better for me. For those who disagree, I will try to start all the bawdy sections in a new reply with some hint that things may be getting <inappropriate>
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