Thread: [Fictional Stories - ENF] The Ravenous Bug - Continued
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Old 08-06-2016, 07:00 AM
Mortimer Mortimer is offline
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Default Thank you for the story

I really enjoyed this one, it was a a fun read.

Something bugs me a little though:
in chapter 4 we got Amy getting away from the bug barebottomed, and the moth change targets without finishing her, but when we see her again in chapter 5 she's fully naked hidding in the bushes. Did we miss a cretor/creature confrontation here?
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