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Old 01-07-2016, 12:05 PM
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Originally Posted by berrybushfan View Post
Excellently written. I love the fact that you reduce number of characters to make things more vivid. Nice catfight between Nalini and Veena. However, stripping of madam Shilpa is not very elaborate.

Just a request, can you bring some more career women with authorities likes of teacher and doctor? Would also love to see the mother daughter duo in action.

Thanks. Keep going.
Any scenarios you might want explored with teachers, doctors or mother-daughter ?
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