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Old 01-07-2016, 10:00 AM
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Default Excellent sequel

Excellently written. I love the fact that you reduce number of characters to make things more vivid. Nice catfight between Nalini and Veena. However, stripping of madam Shilpa is not very elaborate.

Just a request, can you bring some more career women with authorities likes of teacher and doctor? Would also love to see the mother daughter duo in action.

Thanks. Keep going.
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