Important
A response to issues with the story.
General audience - I feel that the more recent chapters suffered a drop in quality and will probably take some time to rewrite them. Update rate will suffer as a result.
smjimmie1348 - Yeah the issues you had were also things I noticed. I think the quality slid a bit. I'm actually probably going to rewrite Episodes 5 and 6. I kinda dedicated to a plot path I now regret. It accelerated the story too much. The update rate of this story will probably decrease but I'm going to take some time to slow down the whole story and rewrite parts I dislike.
Trans-Atlantic flights should always have USB outlets in this day and age... Fucking British Airways.
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