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Originally Posted by Chasmo
Indeed! I made sure to give props to Hal in my post about current ideas but hopefully I've done enough original work here to make this story stand (or fall) on its own merits. As for the Depends or non-consensual sex pieces of his original -- worry not! They won't be making it into this tale. Hope to have the final part or two up by the weekend. Thanks to all for the encouragement and feedback!
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Yeah, you were pretty blatant in your "3 options" post, I have no idea how I missed it.
I made myself a slightly edited version of Strip in Aisle Nine that removes the parts I don't like, but I can already tell that your far, FAR improved version will take its place.