Michelle seems to be the perfect foil. I think her getting the works again is perfect, they way you had her setup to be stripped and the long spanking sequence was great. My preference has always been good vs bad/snobby with of course snobby being on the receiving end. While Barbara is not totally innocent, since your first story I have loved her character and another public confrontation between these two would end in Michelle humiliation again. As you've done in the past throwing in little tidbits from famous stripping/spanking movies is always a great touch. Also love the fact you had the woman in the audience laughing at Michele's humiliation, great stuff.
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