Great buildup and wonderful stripping sequence, I do understand your concern with the ending, as it does not seem to finalize Danielle's humiliation. I"d love a public spanking by one of her many rivals to add to her embarrasment, which you have done many times and it would seem to fit with Danillle need to be dominated. Also how about something along these lines. Mrs. Parnell is hated by all the woman in town, in today's day and age word and pictures of her on going stripping and humiliation quickly spreads thru town, which causes a huge crowd to gather outside in courtyard. Mrs. Parnell is marched outside, either before her spanking or having it done outside and them somehow her and her panties are hoisted up the flagpole for everyone's viewing pleasure. Please I do not mean to imply your story is not awesome, I could never come close to writing something as brilliant as this, just some of my random thoughts.
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