[QUOTE=Chasmo;2061716]I apologize in advance for an ending with which I'm still not completely satisfied. Although I may yet revise it or pen an epilogue I hope that it doesn't totally disappoint.
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That was worth the wait. I think I know what you're feeling, though. Your newer stories usually end with some special final humiliation, which this seems to lack, fantastic though it is.
And, if you WERE going to write any more parts, I believe readers of this thread already know which particular red haired beauty, who happens to be gloating haughtily at this very point in the story, I might wish to come down a peg. Perhaps she attempts to stop Danielle from leaving, or exercises her newfound dominance over her, with disastrous results? Just a thought.
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