Thanks!
Great story, man. I like the plot and your sense for a detail.
Anyway, if I could give you a feedback I guess that there is one thing that could make your stories even better. The climax of your story is very brief. I (and possibly other readers) will appreciate if you are more descriptive and devote more paragraphs to troubles of the main character struggling with her unlucky fate.
This is just a remark of an amateur. Your story is great. Keep writing!
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