[amfanon]

Fantastic, as usual. I'll add the same constructive criticism as I have before: I wish the stripping scenes were longer. The descriptions are amazing--you're like some sort of build-up deity. The descriptions of the characters's appearance, dress, and attitude are VERY well fleshed out, creating stunning characters we can't wait to see brought low. But then the wardrobe mishap occurs, and after all that buildup, it's over in half a second. Long story short, I prefer stories like "Pride Goeth Before Her (Clothes) Fall", with more clothing items and longer stripping scenes to stories like "And they're off" with just a couple items and very short stripping scenes. (note: you can do longer scenes with few items, it's just harder)

On a less constructive note, Nicole is still my favorite character (mmm, redheads), and I hope to see her again soon!