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Old 05-30-2015, 06:49 PM
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Originally Posted by ewong247 View Post
I think I'm going to wipe out my Tale of Two Sisters story if no one has any interest. I don't think many here have sen it, actually. Here's a link:

http://www.writing.com/main/interact...of-Two-Sisters

It only has 10 chapters, and I'm not sure what to do with it yet. Any suggestions? I'm not particularly confident of my skills in writing an interesting premise or knowing what kinds of chapter options would be enticing for others to add to.
I've never actually seen that story before, no. I'll take a look, see if I can add anything.

It can be tough starting an Interactive story. I've only done one myself (She Doesn't Know), but I think it helps if the originator adds a few chapters (3 or 4 maybe) to give other writers a taste of what you're aiming for. That's why it took me so long to add something to Naked Gamer Girls - there was only one scene written, I think, so I wasn't sure what the originator was trying to achieve.

As for chapter options... well, just an idea, but maybe add a mild option and a harsh option? So like, if a girl's skirt is caught in a door and she moves away, the options could be it tears a little (mild, allows for delayed gratification) or it tears off completely and is irreparable (harsh, instant gratification).
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