Thread: Rayna's big day
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Old 03-19-2015, 07:10 PM
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Yeah but it wasn't long enough it was too rushed for anyone to enjoy it. You need to give people a chance to get into it and a chance to connect to the characters you don't enjoy a film when you don't like any characters. This follows the same principle allow yourself to build the characters up so when the stripping happens we actually care another thing about characters you give no clue as to why Rhonda steps on her dress you could explain there backstory.
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