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Originally Posted by superfag95
Nice work just maybe the only thing I see wrong with this is maybe the story part should be in smaller paragraphs and not just a huge one apart from that really enjoyed it.
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Unfortunately, I typed it in Word and it was well-paragraphed, but that aspect of the formatting seems to have been lost when I copy/pasted. I'll likely continue on this thread, but it may be some time.