Thread: [Fictional Stories - ENF] Curse Karma College
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Old 01-25-2015, 12:55 AM
MickGesitt MickGesitt is offline
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Default Great Start

Uh-oh, daddy's gonna be pissed. Do they use Corporal Punishment at CKC? With the position that she's stuck in its almost like she's asking for it.

This was well written and a great introduction to your story. I don't see anything that would qualify as 'rule breaking' so keep on writing. I'm excited to see what happens next.

Great job.
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