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Originally Posted by amf85
I don't think so. Other than a handful of awkwardly structured parts and a few tiny grammatical slips, it seems pretty close to perfect structurally. As to content, I put it at your best story so far.
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I agree, it's certainly up to your usual (high) standard. I've never really been into erotic stories and I used to ignore this part of the forum, but yours have introduced me to them. I have since found more that I enjoy, so thanks for inspiring me Chasmo. Could you recommend a good site for similar ones to your own?