Great start!
You weren't kidding about this being a more mature story. Michelle McCool gets laid out and stripped topless in the first chapter. Awesome work.
I've been dying for a story where Michelle McCool gets humiliated. When it comes to stories on this site Michelle always seems to get away with all the crap she pulls. I was very happy to see Michelle come out on the losing end for once and that was just the start.
As for Lana, since AJ's leaving and Paige has lost her Anti-Diva gimmick to become a watered down Total Diva, Lana is currently my favorite Raw Diva. Its not that I'm anti-American. Its because she actually has a gimmick and she plays her character wonderfully. Gimmicks are hard to maintain when you're a trying to be a reality star by playing "yourself". Rusev is just a generic big guy and is pretty boring with a boring submission move for a finisher. Lana generates all the heat for the pair and is really the only interesting thing about Rusev.
I also enjoyed the way you made up for Lana's lack of wrestling experience. She's a manager, not a full-fledged wrestler so she'll need to use all sorts of underhanded tactics to come out ahead.
I can't wait to see what happens next with Lana vs the reunited LayCool.
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