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Originally Posted by smjimmie1348
What's a appropriate number of parts for this fued to go toe to toe with the best stories on this forum
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It has nothing to do with the amount of parts, it's the quality of the writing. No matter how often you defend yourself (even against a bloody site moderator) you still just plain haven't stopped to look at how to make a story more enjoyable. Adding a paragraph or occasionally using a comma will not make you a good writer, neither will a story that's forty chapters long. You need to dedicate yourself to quality, sincere writing that is easy on the eyes and enjoyable to read.
noone wans to reed a stroy like this even if its abuot bellas or watever.
Sentences like that are why you aren't considered a good writing. You can't just choose a popular topic and suddenly become great because you wrote about it. Your stories are barely readable and the readers with even a basic understanding of grammar and punctuation cry. I'd forgive a typo or two, but it's like you can't even stomach reading your own story to look over and see how the final product turned out.