Smjimmie, I see the work you're trying to put into this and that's awesome. But the one thing you shouldn't be doing is arguing with two readers who really want to help you. Mick has gone out of his way to punctuate some of your chapters; if you follow what he did in his examples, we would not have any issues. Don't take this the wrong way, I like your passion for this but it's not quite at the level of publishing.
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