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Old 09-28-2014, 09:15 PM
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Originally Posted by smjimmie1348 View Post
I have some punctuation and I'm at least trying usually I would just sit and wait for others to do one like it or a request from me so yeah and I understand what u are saying about the hard work I know because I put hard work in my stories as well and I'm sry 1993wwe for doing that I truly am and I hope u can forgive me
It's hard for us to believe that you're working hard on improving your writing and punctuation, when your responses are completely stripped of any kind of punctuation. You got to start somewhere. Start with the general language when you write anything, or else you'll be stuck forever in no-punctuation land. The lack of punctuation leads to all around poor writing, not only in your stories, but in your other posts as well. It's hard to understand what you're trying to say. This is the best tip I can give you.
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