Hey Alexandra! Thanks for your kind words and very thoughtful constructive criticism. Understanding how Danielle is feeling as she is literally "stripped" of her superiority will no doubt improve the stories markedly for the reader. It's a great idea that I'll do my best to implement (maybe even in the rewriting of Along Came a Spider). Thanks also for your encouragement on my next idea. The arrogant man in question is actually her law/business partner rather than husband/boyfriend partner but the two of them are even more imperious together than Danielle is alone so I'm hoping I can do their downfall justice!
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