[MickGesitt]

As expected now, another fantastic chapter.

Dayjib mentioned this from last episode. But it's worth mentioning a second time. I really like how you get into the mindset of the divas during the match. You're making it clear what their motivations are and how they're feeling. Paige's desperation and frustration come across perfectly and being able to know why the other divas are doing what they're doing without them actually saying it is a great addition. This really brings the humiliation aspect to a whole new level.

From this chapter specifically, I loved the AJ-Paige segment. Is this a future alliance I'm seeing? And I enjoyed how you wrote Rosedust for the match. Clearly Goldust's Attitude Antics have rubbed off on her. I also I enjoyed your match from this chapter, you could have easily made it turn into a handicap match but instead you made it a true triple threat match. The ending was great because now the Bellas are inflicting pain on each other instead of the audience for a change. I also liked how you had Paige think that she's getting used to defending herself and keeping her clothes on in these kind of matches. Gettin used to things by necessity is important for survival.

After a close call with Paige, Nikki Bella ends up as the first diva to show their tits. Couldn't have happened to a nicer girl. Nikki's a horrible actress and is utterly talentless as a wrestler so its nice that she's showing off the two attributes that she actually has going for her, even if they are artificially enhanced. And speaking of showing off, Dolph Ziggler would be proud of how over-the-top you went with showing off Nikki's big fake boobs. Having Paige lock in the full nelson was just great.

One tiny thing to nitpick... you had the ring announce say that the match was scheduled for "one fall". That's only the case if a match is one fall to finish. Since it was an elimination triple threat match, it was actually a two falls to finish match. Just thought I'd point that out.

The battle lines are now clearly drawn in your story. I can't help but wonder if you plan to employ the Elimination Chamber at Elimination Chamber. You've got Stephanie's henchgirls in Layla, Nikki Bella and Rosedust and you've got Paige's uneasy alliance with AJ and Brie Bella. That would be the ultimate test for Paige to pull through. Then when the dust settles Paige could challenge Stephanie to a match at WrestleMania so Steph can stop hiding behind her flunkies and try humiliating Paige herself for a change.

Whatever way you're going with this, I'm really enjoying the ride. This story has reached a new peak with the first pair of breasts being revealed. Something tells me that will become a more common occurance in the chapters to come before you kick it up another notch. Keep the great work.