Getting better. This time you broke it up so its easier to follow. I took what you had and punctuated it.
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Originally Posted by smjimmie1348
Hey guys and gals I'm back for part 2 of my story called " Birth of a Crazy Chick" and last part we saw Eva Marie and Summer Rae defeat AJ and the Divas Champion Paige in a tag team match. So lets get part 2 started shall we?
Micheal Cole - "Last Monday was a tremendous tag team match where we saw Paige turn on AJ which allowed Eva Marie and Summer Rae to earn a chance at Paige's Diva's Championship. Let's go backstage where we have Renee Young interviewing Eva Marie."
The cameras go back to the Divas Locker Room where Renee Young is standing by with Eva Marie.
Renee Young - " Eva, last week you and your partner Summer Rae defeated AJ and the Divas Champion Paige when Paige abandoned AJ. With that win you've earned a chance at Paige's Divas Championship but you will have to beat your partner from last week Summer Rae to get it. Your thoughts?"
Before Eva can answer, AJ comes out of nowhere and hits Eva Marie from behind. Renee runs off as AJ picks Eva up and throws Eva Marie head first into the locker. Eva is left face-down on the floor of the Diva's locker room.
AJ - "You want to humiliate me? Well I can humiliate you as well!"
AJ grabs Eva Marie's shirt and pulls it up and off her body to reveal Eva Marie's red bra
AJ - "That was for not helping me when Paige decided to strip me down to my underwear on Monday!"
AJ grabs Eva by her hair and slams her head onto the floor then walks off to end the segment on Friday Night Smackdown.
So that was part 2 let me know what u think and I know it was short but part 3 will be longer and I hope I can get that to you by Sunday so stay tuned to find out
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I'm not doing this to be mean. I can tell from all your posts that your really enthusiastic about wrestling and the stories on this board. But one of your biggest problems here has always been your writing format and your grammar. That's okay for when you're posting comments but when you're writing a story the most important part is that other people on the board are able to read it, otherwise why are you even bothering to share it? I'm getting rid of your biggest problem for you by fixing the segments of your stories. Now you can focus on writing the best quality story that you can.