[Dayjib]

Oh wow! This chapter was just incredible. I mean you last stuff was really fantastic, but this just blows them away, your best work to date by quite a distance, which is really saying something given your quality before. Just, WOW.

Descriptive, intriguing, you can get a real idea of how humiliated the women are feeling (describing their mindset, which I absolutely love) and as the episodes go on the humiliation is slowly but certainly increasing.

That Stephanie dynamic has really interested me in the future, as well as the increased exposure of Paige with her getting stripped to a tiny thong here; it has me asking whether she is going to be completely stripped and humiliated by the end, or is she going to have the last laugh on Stephanie (now that she is seemingly the good guy; also a brilliant touch, that the crowd reaction to her has organically turned her face, a small detail which you really didn't have to do, but doing so makes the story seem all the more real).

That's the other thing, the rolling counter of the events, and the mention of camera details again make it all the more real; just incredible attention to detail.

I am gushing here, and I just can't praise this enough; 10/10, one of the best chapters on this site. I don't think you would mind me saying that whilst I loved your work, DoctorRipper's AJ/Paige story was always just one step ahead. Not anymore, this chapter has pulled you right up to his incredibly high standards in my estimation. The duel of the Paige stories has really begun, and it is between two stories which could easily end up being the two best on the site.

Speaking of best of the site, have you been reading and taking notes from Power Hungry GM? Because this last chapter read a lot like that, in an excellent way.

I literally can not wait for next Sunday. I know you need the week to truely form these great stories, but I am going to be a huge spoiled baby and say I need this next chapter now! hahahahaha.

p.s-just stuff that I loved that I missed out: -Paige getting more and more into her character; first the kiss, then the showboating when stripping (it's not just about winning the title anymore, she has to do it in style) and obviously that last sentance showing her exhibitionist side come out, teasing the fans.
-The fact that from your first post, I have now realized that we still have 5 more chapters of this to come.