Great stuff again mate; plot development, smart story with Paige abusing the rules to win, a change of pace with Paige getting humiliated just a little bit for once, and of course the all Bra and Panties match rule. A much more descriptive chapter as well which I am really appreciative of; I would raise the point of maybe describing the humiliated mindset of the female suffering the malfunction a little bit more, but that wasn't really applicable here given that Paige did it to herself without shame to win.
Great stuff; next chapter planned for next weekend again?
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