Thanks for the kind words again. Really does help me grow more confident.
As a quick reply to Gesitt-
In regards to Naomi's reveal lacking some description: That's a fair point to make, and looking back, it's pretty accurate. I tried to put a bit more of a spotlight on the actual euf moment but yeah, description could've used a bit more. I hate to say it was because I rushed to get a second chapter in for the first weekend, but I doubt that helped matters. But I agree that I'd rather have 9 solid chapters posted over nine weeks than 9 okay ones that were posted over six weeks. I'll definitely keep your point about description in mind for the future chapters because I'd like to be pretty confident that these moments are already living up to their full potential before we get to the bigger ones.
In regards to the skipping through: I'm definitely going to keep to that format because I'd like to have a big pay per view in each chapter. As we get further along, especially towards the end, there will definitely be more detail spent on the week by week developments leading to the match. But each chapter would include the big ppv match.
Rosedust: Rosedust will be covered more in a future chapter, but she is Rosa Mendes with her blonde hair and a singlet very similarly designed to Stardust and Goldust that is black and gold.
And as a very minor spoiler: The next chapter will be at Survivor Series and will feature Paige defending her championship against Calgary's finest, Natalya Neidhart.
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