I have no idea how my comments brought out this great story. But I hope you will continue to write. As far as the length of your story it seems fine to me. We enjoyed every word. Don't worry about the number of THANKS. Most readers don't bother.
We rarely read the fiction. There are so many great real life adventures we'd rather keep it real. I guess the title about the old dogs interested this old dog because we have learned so much here on this forum. I know nothing about you. But feel even though this is fiction there is some truth in this story. If nothing more, a bit of your own wishful fantasy mixed in. Even your user name and the person in the story are the same. Coincidental? Perhaps in the future you will write a few true stories or another wishful fantasy.
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