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Old 08-11-2014, 03:37 PM
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Wow this is just BRILLIANT!

First of all it is very funny because these day sI was thinking about: "Well, how could a game TV show would provide EUF moments?" and then you provide the answer

I love the slow and progressive build up. How Sam feels comfident at first, laughing about the fate of the previous contestant like the crowd, as she thinks about the trick she would use if she was in that situation... But then, the sudden realization she was not wearing those shorts... The panic, the fear as she may remember what kind of panties she chose to wear... And the terrible Damocles Sword above her head, knowing that if she fails, her fate would be suddenly more embarassing...

Then all the variety of reactions during the game, as she feels comfident at first, but then everytime she fails she loses more and more comfidence as she realizes she is close to the edge of showing her panties on TV. This mix of fear, trying to reassure herself but knowing what could easily happen is thrilling, and so funny! Especially when bit by bit she comes closer to the last question, and the crowd begins to be quite angry...

And that silly ending when she gives the wrong answer, and the world collapses... And wow, so attractive panties for a lovely girl! It makes her EUF situation quite more embarassing, and you described it very well!

Very good job

Hey! Long time without hearing from you!

I'm glad that you liked the story. As always, you really get the whole point of the story. It's beyond the embarrassing exposure; it's more about the extreme feelings of powerlessness and self-consciousness after a long period of draining tension.

This was a story that I had in the backburner, to say it best. I started to write it a long time ago and finished it just recently. It's funny how easily ideas can come to your mind; just watch a gameshow and bam! Here's a new EUF story!

I really like Amanda. She's one of those cheerleader-type girls that think that they're smarter than everyone else. Amanda has proven to be smart, but she also has proven to have too much confidence on herself, which she paid for!
She also has proven to have good taste in underwear...
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