Definitely not rubbish
Cervino. Part 1 is certainly not rubbish. I like the way you are building up toward what I presume will be the action to come in Part 2.
I favor stories that do have a gradual build-up to the sexual action, but have seen too many stories where it's all about 'humping' 'pounding' and........well I am sure you get the message.
As someone who is also in the process of writing erotic literature for (hopefully) publication I am looking to see the different styles that are out there, and I must admit that the gradual build-up which leaves the reader in anticipation for more, appeals to me much more than the 'wham-bam' approach.
Yes, I like.
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