Armageddon
Great job on the last match. And its nice to see the storyline progressing. You might want to limit your strip-elimination match at the Royal Rumble to a bra and panties type match. Having fourteen women stripped naked seems like it would be too much at once. Maybe have the winner strip the runner up naked but don't go too crazy. This story is still new and you'd need more build up for all those women to be stripped at once.
When the 'mystery woman' appeared, I never expected it to be Sable. But that's what's great about the universe your story is in, you never know who is going to show up. Classic WWF, ANYTHING CAN HAPPEN! Be sure to draw on Sable's old "relationship" with Mr. McMahon from back in fall 2003 if you want to take her to the next level as a heel.
However, I feel the need to point out that your Diva's Championship Match with Velvet and your Buck Naked Match with Sable ended the same way. With a third unannounced competitor winning the gold. Its starting to get a little old. You might want to have your next match have a decisive one-on-one finish for a change.
But for the record. You mentioned Stacy being Trish's "biggest rival" like five times in your match. And I know you were trying talk up your match. But Trish's biggest rival is, and always will be, Lita. Those two revolutionized women's wrestling. Lita and Trish had plenty of matches against each other before Stacy even showed up in the WWF with the Invasion storyline. And even after Stacy left, Trish and Lita still had another couple great matches against each other.
There's a reason why Trish and Lita are in the Hall of Fame and Stacy is struggling to keep herself relevant after her failed relationship with George Clooney. Stacy was never a good enough wrestler to be considered a legitimate threat to Trish. She was always just a pretty face with ridiculously long legs (that you didn't really pay all the much attention to in the Buck Naked Match).
For a moment I actually thought/hoped the 'mystery women' was Lita out for revenge on Stacy and Trish for stripping her topless on Raw. You mentioned her wearing cargo pants and that's always been Lita's thing. I doubt Sable has ever worn cargo pants a day in her life. And honestly, I think Lita would be a better heel champion than Sable since she can actually wrestle.
But that's just me. I'm still interested in seeing where your story goes. Keep it up.
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