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Old 04-23-2014, 04:46 AM
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Fantastic chapter, Nathaniel. It's nice to finally see some full nudity, but I'm glad you've been keeping it to a minimum so far. It makes the actual moments of nudity stand out all the more. I especially liked how you made use of Sabrina's powers, too. Each of the gym leaders has had her own fighting style, obviously, but this one really stood out as the most interesting so far, at least in my opinion.

Anyway, definitely looking forward to the next one.
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