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Originally Posted by Nathaniel Keam
Describe what the women are wearing in graphic detail. It's frustrating when I'm reading a story about a woman being stripped and I have little to no idea what they're actually wearing or what they even look like.
Also, if the story is particularly long, mention what they're wearing again later on. The reader shouldn't have to scroll back up again to find out what they were wearing.
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I'm probably in the minority here, but I generally prefer when writing follows conventional language, rather than pornographic language. Describing what someone looks like is fine, but descriptions like "her C-cup tits" or "perfect pussy" really takes me out of the story and reminds me of what I'm
really reading. There are better and more elegant ways of conveying those things. I believe ENF is a genre that benefits from feeling genuine, but pornographic style writing absolutely destroys that for me.