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Old 03-19-2014, 03:03 AM
Nathaniel Keam Nathaniel Keam is offline
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Describe what the women are wearing in graphic detail. It's frustrating when I'm reading a story about a woman being stripped and I have little to no idea what they're actually wearing or what they even look like.

Also, if the story is particularly long, mention what they're wearing again later on. The reader shouldn't have to scroll back up again to find out what they were wearing.
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