Just got it
Rustynail
I was able to download the apartment. Most has been summarized nicely here all ready.
Good music, nice use of multiple camera angles, good editing , some enf moments.
My suggestion would be to 'build' towards the nudity. Kind of like once she is revealed in the story
reveal her to the camera. She could be nude but remain hidden to the camera.
Keep at it. We will be watching!
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