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Originally Posted by Busy_D
Great story. One of the best I've read on these boards in a while. Really enjoyed it.
Would have been great to see some nudity. And I wasn't sure about the late introduction of Elisa though.
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I'm glad to hear you liked it so much.
As I said, I'm not really into the whole nudity thing. I've done it before in my other stories and I think I get sort of bored by that point. No idea why really.
Elisa I wanted to add to add a little input from the crowd. I didn't really want it to be so one dimensional. I also liked the fact that it looked like I was setting up for Amber's anger to get the better of her, only to switch back again. I wasn't actually sure who I wanted to win until I was actually writing the ending.