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Old 01-12-2014, 04:15 PM
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Default Chapter 4 Red Shadow's Weakness? Lily's Outta Time!

I know I've written a lot but I just felt the urge to recently!

Three days had passed since Lily dealt with the chameleon monster at Kate's house and it appears she is still feeling the full effects of the fight.

"Ouch, everything hurts..." She said to herself as she lay strewn out across her bed.

It was early morning and she was feeling a mixture of pain and sleep deprivation preventing her from moving too much. Lily felt much aggravation and tried to move so she could help Sarah get ready for school but to no avail. "What an unpleasant Tuesday." She thought to herself until eventually the 14 year old walked into her room.

"Mum it's time to get up." She said staring at her mother who is still lying in her bed.

"Sorry sweetie mum's not feeling too great right now, can you get your self ready?" She asked as Sarah gave a nod and went downstairs.

A little while passed as Sarah went until Lily finally was able to move. She almost jumped with joy as the pain died down, she then made her way downstairs and relaxed in the living room once again passing the time watching TV only for herself to doze off on the sofa. She opened her eyes and found herself back in the house with the old man.

"I see you're feeling better than earlier." He chuckled whilst sipping some tea, much to Lily's dismay. "Things sure have gotten exciting for you, you even have an admirer now." He smiled.

"It's not great, not the way she wants it." Lily said angrily.

"Well don't think that's the last thing you'll fight, there are many people out there who will come to you, you know?" He laughed. "Besides you must be careful of the Red Shadow's weakness."

Lily put on an irritated look, she then gave a deep sigh before awaking in her living room once more, she sat in a daze before hearing the doorbell ring, she went to answer it only to see an unfamiliar face. The person on the other side was a woman wearing glasses, with long red hair, she looked like a buxom librarian that filled many a male fantasy.

"Hi there I'm Ellie, it's a pleasure to meet you." She smiled happily.

Lily greeted her and found out that she was one of the people living on her street, there were a total of 7 houses including Lily's, and she has met four of the residents that lived directly on her street.

They chatted for about a half hour, over that course she learnt that Ellie was 36 years old and worked as a Lawyer, before this she was busy with a case and that's why she didn't come to see her new neighbour until now. Lily enjoyed the company and after she left, Lily went back to sitting at home doing nothing but trying to think up how to write the next instalment of her story until night hit.

"Mum I'm going to bed now." Sarah said before going to sleep that night.

That night Lily got up and got dressed in her costume before leaving her home to wander around, normally she would refuse t even think about it, but for some reason tonight the idea appealed to her. She moved around at a blinding speed enjoying all of her new abilities, she had super speed and super agility making her able to move around like a ninja like blur. She sprinted around for the better part of an hour until it happened.

"What the?" She said to herself as she looked down at her boots which began to fall apart!

She froze for a moment and then noticed that the same had happened to her gloves, they began to crumble off of her body. It was then that she had another vision of the old man.

"Well seems like that's your weakness." He said as if understanding something.

"What weakness!?" She yelled back to him.

"Well you see each of the Red Shadow's had a weakness that held them, a nasty side effect of the power given by the clothes I'm afraid." He said seriously.

"And?" Lily replied.

"Well let me elaborate, each one had a weakness based around their power, I had super durability but was blessed by terrible luck, another Red Shadow had Super intelligence but was weaker than a child. You have super speed but seem to be on some kind of time limit." He said.

"And what happens when time runs out?" Lily asked apprehensively.

"Your costume will vanish." He said as Lily froze. "And so will your powers, you might want to get home quick otherwise you'll bare more than your secret identity." He chuckled. "But don't worry mum's don't feel embarrassment right!?"

Lily felt her face heat up, sure some don't, but Lily does when it comes to this situation. Her vision ended and she began to sprint home, as she did she felt her cape become a scarf and fall off, then her fishnet's became lace which trailed behind her and with each piece of clothing her speed diminished. She ran trying desperately to make it to her home.

"Almost there..." She said panting as she arrived a couple of streets from her house.

She stood sweat dripping from her body, the pavement damp from her sweaty feet as she walked, she looked down at the leotard and noticed that it began to bare her midriff. She tried to run barely faster than an average person as her leotard became a pair of shorts and a tank top combo, to a set of red bra and panties, she felt her body heat up as it crumbled behind her, when she finally reached her street, she looked at the tattered remains attached to her body. It looked like she was wearing a string bikini top and a thong, she felt humiliated, she wanted to crawl into a hole and never come out, then she braced herself and did one final dash to make it to her home as it crumbled leaving her just in a red mask. She then made it round the back of the house jumping a fence in the process and climbed in through the window out back, as she did the mask fell off and became strands of fabric.

"Finally home." She said sneaking into the living room, only to hear the voice of her daughter.

"Finally back home eh?" She said staring at her nude sweat covered mother.

Lily almost screamed as did Sarah once she realised how her mother was dressed. (Not at all) Lily began trying to cover herself as Sarah ran upstairs.

"You went streaking!? You're a PERVERT!!!" She shouted before running upstairs.

Lily felt herself begin to cry as she stood completely naked in her living room.

That night Lily felt more shame than ever before.

I hope you enjoyed it and stay tuned for Chapter 5! "Lily's Second Encounter? The Monster Who Can Steal Anything!"
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