Thread: [Fictional Stories - ENF] Pokemon Gotta Strip em' All
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Old 12-05-2013, 11:23 PM
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Default Chapter 17.5 Noelle the ghost (Erena Side)

I figured that I had this set up so why not do a story about it?

"I'm sooooo tired!" Erena moaned to herself as she walked through the swamp. "After all that effort to search and I didn't find a single thing..."

Erena had stayed behind in the cave to look around after Noelle had left, when it came to exploration she had always been a little bit OCD. She always loved the idea of secrets and rare Pokémon so she would almost always put in the effort to search around. A cold breeze passed by her causing her to flinch slightly.

"Hey did you hear about that cave just past the next town? Apparently it's filled with treasure!" Said a man walking past.

"Really? No way that can be true!" Replied his friend.

Erena heard what they what talking about and found herself become suddenly interested. "Um? Excuse me!" She asked the two individuals

A little later...

"So the cave is a past this city?" She thought to herself walking through the streets of Moonlight View, the reason for the name was because the town had an incredibly active night life that would be full of parties and excitement making it a popular tourist attraction. "I wonder if Noelle has gotten here yet?" She asked herself as she looked around. The streets were almost completely empty due to most of the people being night people, but Erena found herself getting lost even still amongst the many tall buildings. "I'm lost?" She thought to herself, she wandered around a little more before feeling an intense feeling of tiredness, it was only natural she had been doing a lot in one day with little to no sleep in between. "I know I'll find a hotel!" She thought to herself before searching every hotel around.

A little bit more later...

"Why is this the only hotel I can afford?" She asked herself staring up at the little run down wooden hotel. The prices in this town were much larger than anywhere else due to the place being such a tourist spot, because of this the amount of hotels were ridiculous. "I'm having such a bad day." She said with a sigh, she had wanted to stay in the local Pokémon centre but they were full to the brim with trainers who couldn't afford rooms and as such the only place to go was here. She purchased a room and walked up to it, when she arrived she noticed that the rooms were tiny barely able to fit even a bed with a tiny window that had only the view of the other buildings towering over it. Erena changed into her Pyjama's and began to doze off but found that the wooden mattress was incredibly uncomfortable and as such could only get to sleep for a little while before waking up with back ache. She felt utterly discouraged as nothing seemed to go her way, it was then that through the thin walls she heard two girls complaining.

"Why is there no cheaper hotels?" One asked.

"Better question, why is it this hotel still charges so much for rooms that barely have any size to them?" The other girl replied.

Erena began to feel annoyed as what they said was somewhat true, the prices were absurd for the quality of the room, she gave a deep sigh until she heard a deep chuckling. "What the?" She asked until she heard a knock on the door next door.

"Hello there, I hear you aren't enjoying the services provided by this hotel." Said a man with a gruff voice.

"Well can you blame us?" The first girl replied.

"Well I do know a way to earn a bit of cash here and there..." He said in a deep chuckling voice before the sound of rummaging began to happen. "Here I have five tickets to the finest hotel around, I will give them to you if you help me."

"With what?" The other girl replied.

"Smart girl, you see there is a cave north of here that is said to have some deep archaeological discoveries, but is also crawling with Pokémon, I am not a trainer you see, so I was looking around for five others who wouldn't mind finding me these two rocks."

Erena jumped and without missing a beat. "I'll help!" She said without hesitation.

Even more later...

After a couple of hours five people met up outside a cave slightly north of the city, it was five girls all of which had two picture of two fossils. Erena couldn't contain her excitement for adventure, she got her stuff ready and almost sprinted to the destination two hours before the meeting time.

"I can't wait for those tickets!" Smiled one of the girls who had brown hair.

"I know right!" Yelled another with ginger hair.

All five whilst working together would also be competing as only two of the rooms were high quality whilst the rest were run of the mill. Erena didn't mind though as she just thought about the possibilities of the treasure that awaited her. All five girls went inside the cave and walked ahead until the path split into three. There was a middle, a left and a right path. The brown and ginger haired girl went down the left, whilst the one with black hair went down the right path, the one with blonde hair and Erena went down the middle. Erena walked slowly through the cave as a cool breeze blew past her, she felt excited about the treasure more and more as the notion filled her mind. After a little while she pulled out the survival bag given to her by the guy, which she then used to put a little mark on where she had been.

"Um? Excuse me." she heard the girl behind her speak. "I'm Wendy, what's your name?" She asked.

"Erena" she replied.

The girl gave a bright smile and stared at her gently, Erena glanced over her, she had blonde hair cut to her shoulders, a small chest (B cup), blue eyes0, she also wore a schoolgirl uniform which consisted of a white shirt, a black skirt, short white ankle socks and black flats.

Both girls walked ahead until they found themselves at what looked like a room, they both began to look around, they scoped over the area to no avail until eventually they found what looked like a rock that match the image. Erena picked it up and glanced over it comparing it to the picture, it was a match! Erena handed it to Wendy and pulled out a carrying case but when she turned back Wendy was gone and had sprinted off with the fossil. Erena gave chase but soon found herself being out sped when Wendy sent out a Cyndaquil that immediately used smokescreen mixed with an ember to which a mini explosion of air which pushed Erena back. She walked out of the cave with her hair frizzy and her clothes in tatters until she once again saw the Wendy holding both fossils and was standing by the other three contestants all of which were naked and tied up.

"You know stealing would be hard if it wasn't me." She smiled and pulled off her disguise revealing she was actually Heather! "Nice huh?" She laughed.

Erena felt irritated. "How dare you!?" Erena yelled, it was then that a black haired woman appeared, she was wearing a slim red dress and stared at the commotion in front of her. "What is this?" She said.

"This is bad, I know who you are Gym Leader of Moonlight View City, Alicia!" Heather felt threatened. "Stay back otherwise I'll strip you down to your underwear!" Heather said moving at a blinding speed.

"Silly girl...Who says I even wear underwear!?" Alicia yelled before she grabbed Heather and held her up. "Stealing is a heinous crime you know?" She laughed with a cold stare worn on her face.

Erena froze as she watched Heather be stripped, tied up and whipped for what must've felt like an eternity, before getting given the fossils back. Erena untied the other girls but was giving the fossils as a consolation prize, she then walked over to the guy and gave him the fossils outside the hotel. He went to his room to get the tickets and never came back, later did Erena find that inside the bags were hidden cameras that recorded the events inside the cave, which included the stripping of the three other contestants but luckily not Heather and the Alicia's escapades. Erena found herself hating her luck even more after this event...

To Be Continued (Long chapter sorry)
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