I'm inclined to agree, honestly. From a personal standpoint, that unwillingness and embarrassment is what I look for in stories like this. It's okay for the girls to wind up liking the attention, and sex obviously isn't a hang-up for me when it comes to these types of stories, but the point of enf, at least in my opinion, is to focus on the embarrassment; the sheepish squirming and trying to cover up and the girls desperate clinging to what remains of their dignity. I get that no one writing these is exactly creating award-winning literature, but when things escalate to the point where the girls are being ****d or traumatized, that immediately ruins it for me. That's honestly why I stopped enjoying Camp Clearwater. Some of the paths started out alright, but then there seemed to be an awful lot of the girls breaking down sobbing and shitting their pants in front of their mothers and it just got uncomfortable.
I guess from my perspective, if you want to write a **** story, this isn't really the right genre for that. There's a big difference between girls being embarrassed and stripped in public, and girls being held down and forced to suck off four dudes at once, you know?
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