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Old 12-01-2013, 12:29 AM
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Default Chapter 1 Realm Of Spirits

Now I hope you guys don't mind it taking a bit of time for the story to get good, I prefer a story that has an actual story if you know what I mean? It just makes everything a bit more exciting when you can lose yourselves in the tale with actual characters.

Autumn walked through the door that sat before her and found herself walking through a world that was completely white, it looked like a cartoon animator's idea of what Limbo would be. She stopped and looked around but the world had nothing that looked like an ending, she heard the noise of a door shutting behind her and saw the door she entered through disappear.

"No wait!" Autumn shouted as the door faded leaving her stranded in the world of white.

She straightened her glasses, the only object other than her towel that she was wearing and turned around to walk forward, she didn't know what to think as it seemed like there was no way out of the prison she was stuck in. She walked forward for a little while until she saw what looked like another door, she walked up to it and it opened, she peeked into the door as it opened up and noticed that it looked like a closet. It was then the door closed behind her once again leaving her stranded.

She stood in the closet for a minute feeling a sense of confusion until she decided to walked out of it leading into a small room. She looked around it and heard a noise coming from downstairs causing her to rush back into the closet. She peeked out of the gap made in the gap between doors and saw a group of 3 boys all of about 12 years old run into the room and pick something out from under the bed, it looked like a set of toys and then they all ran downstairs. Autumn moved out of the closet and walked over to what looked like a bedroom window, she stared down and noticed that it wasn't her usual street, she stared for a minute before a pair of boys walked in and looked in her direction, she froze and they grabbed something else and walked off completely ignoring her.

"What the hell?" She asked herself walking out of the room and down the stairs.

She found herself in a very modernised living room which had loads of really expensive gadgets, like the newest flat screen TV's and loads of gaming consoles, she walked through the living room and noticed that she was completely invisible, she stared and them and walked in front of them and began to talk, asking them questions about who they are and what is going on to no avail. She then decided to walk outside and find out what is going on but found that she could just walk through the door, she stood stunned at what was going on and decided to see if she could create anything interesting to happen, she walked around the little area she was in and noticed that it was different to the town she lived in.

She walked around noticing that she was completely invisible until she heard a voice. "Look what we have here?" said a deep gruff voice.

She turned and saw what looked like an evil old man done up in a suit, he stared at her sending a chill up her spine, she turned around and ran in the opposite direction, she made her way into a shop and hid "What was that?" She asked herself.

"It was a ghoul." replied a female voice.

She turned and saw a blonde woman standing there facing her. "A ghoul?" She asked.

"Yeah hi I'm Eliza and welcome to the realm of spirits" Eliza said smiling.
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